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托福真题文学创作评分范文　　It is better to spend money on traveling and vacation than to save money for the future？　　　　TCD:　　主客体：people【hidden】|money|trvelling and vacation|future　　动作：spend | save　　限定版：无显著限定版　　结果：better？　　People可以合并，按照人，分学生，雇员，老年人。　　学生旅游益处？快速增长胆识，减轻自学压力 | 赚钱？上补习班|培育爱好|卖一些自己讨厌的东西　　雇员旅游？减低工作压力，强化朋友或家人之间的友谊 | 赚钱？投资|买房|feed the family　　老年人？解闷|快速增长见闻从而取得和后代交流的话题 | 赚钱？下一代基金|自己身体健康　　分结果：投资|教育基金|买房。　　结尾段：现在的人工资低了，有人对于怎么利用这个钱就不会产生有所不同的意见。　　With prominent increasing of the average income level for most individuals, the mindsets towards how to utilize money vary a lot. Some people suggest spending money on vacations, while other hold an argument for the consideration of saving money for future usage. In my view, the latter thought would be more rational.　　妥协段：有人实在把钱拿出来旅游挺好的，可以放开，因为压力大。

然而，现在娱乐方式五花八门，几乎不必须花上很多的钱就可以超过放开的目的，反而是社会较为多变，未来有很多必须银子的地儿。实质上。　　Some people argue to spend money for travelling would help to reduce the daily working pressure for getting relaxed. However, in the current era, there are tons of ways for entertainment by costing less and even no money to get people relaxed and refreshed such as running in a public park with good environment, thus there is no need to spend a considerable amount of money for frequent trips. On the contrary, the world changes rapidly, where there would be chances to use money in the future for every individual. In fact, saving money for future use would be better.　　 01　　主体段一：身体健康 报导法　　Foremost, everybody would have potential health problems in the future, so there definitely should be the consideration to accumulate certain amount of money for such usage. This is because, objectively, the environment is becoming worse due to the intensive human activity which would affect the health of the public, and subjectively, most people are under high pressure caused by busy working and studying tasks. Recently, a 35 year old man who almost gets his life ended up but saved by the surgery due to his sufficient amount of saved money for decades of years received an interview and responded that, “Thanks to my habit of saving money, the cancer caused me depressed finally got diminished. At first the disease was discovered, I was sent to a local hospital, and after a week time for body checking, the doctors there concluded me that I had only half a year of life. I asked my friend who is a professor in a medical university about my situation, and he replied to me that I shouldn’t feel hopeless because he knew a hospital in New York City has the experience to cure such kind of cancer. The only problem was the fee would be hard to imagine for normal individual. Luckily, ten years ago, I formed a habit to save 30% of my wage to a bank account, in case of any issues requiring money in the future. Now, it was the time for taking it out. Subsequently, I flied to NYC and found the hospital, they were pretty should to save my life. After the money had been transferred, I got myself clam down and waited for the surgery. It was a success and now I am still alive, also the saving money habit.”　　 02　　主体段二：投资-》列出法　　Also, the money saved could be utilized for future investments to get oneself further developed. For high students, because they don’t have full-time job income, only limited amount of pocket money given by parents could be used. So, if they could put part of the money saved, they could use the account after their graduation for applying the targeted university and pay for the tuition fee. For employees, obviously saving money is more necessary. Since the price of houses is increasing even ridiculously, it is a must of young people to accumulate money for buying a house after several years. Also, there are various chances appear in the society, so it would be available to put money into a promising project as long as employees have sufficient amount of saved money, where they have the opportunity to become bosses and earn money easily.　　 03　　To sum up, saving money for future usages would be more appropriate compared to spending money on travelling only for a relaxation.。

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